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I have been fortunate to receive a number of very nice compliments on my work from clients in varying stages of their writing careers. I am proud to have them all.

The degree and quality of Jason’s work is astounding. My work will be vastly improved because of his vision.

— Eric Devine, This Side of Normal

Jason has a great eye for detail. He helped improve my writing and my plot. He knows what publishers are looking for to help your novel be successful. I give Jason a resounding recommendation.

— Sal Faizi

I was impressed with Jason's eye for detail and ability to spot subtle but important clarifications to wording in the article he edited for us. He understood and respected the writer's voice while bringing out the underlying information in the article. I expect to take advantage of his services again for future issues of Plateau magazine and other MNA publications.

— Karen Enyedy, Managing Editor, Plateau magazine

I want to thank you again for giving my story new life by channeling your special magic and professionalism into it.

— Jesper Gottlieb

I've just had Jason review my rough concept and scenes for "The GutenbergRubric" and can't tell you how helpful his comments are. His insights into believability of characters, situations, and my occasional "too contrived" plot twists really help me focus on what is important and valuable in my concept and what is really me wandering along trying to find a plausible motive for a behavior that I want.

Nathan Everett. Check out The Gutenberg Rubric on Amazon.

Jason has set two of my manuscripts straight; from pointing out ‘oops’ tense changes thru suggesting workable solutions for my convoluted story lines, he addressed them all. And he somehow did it with the delicacy of a gardener who sings to his seedlings. Jason's expertise is an education well worth the money.

— Peter Bonneau

I could read books on craft, and analyze my favorite authors, but none of that would be as helpful as reading an analysis of what I tend to do in MY writing. Your report is like a personalized reference guide. Even if this book is never published, the detail you showed in your response is extremely helpful to the way I will approach my revisions. Plus, your thoughtful comments will serve as little alarm bells as I write anything new.

— Mark Holtzen

Thanks for your helpful analysis. Your recommendations will make a good story much stronger.

Larry Fowler

You are like a personal trainer for my writing, encouraging me to do more, do better, and go to greater lengths! Your constructive criticism has been so helpful.

— Carolina Banks

Thanks so much for your help. Your perceptions regarding my plot and character development are especially helpful to me. I knew there were weaknesses, but you have pinpointed them which will vastly speed up my process of revision. If I had not used your services, I would have set the book aside for a long while to distance myself from it, but perhaps still would not have found the cures. You've given me a solid basis for a good rewrite, and I'm now much more enthused about my project, even about the arduous task of revising!

— Nancy Bonnington

I am totally thrilled to see your analysis of my book. Thank you so much. You said in your presentation to the Pacific Northwest Writers Association meeting that you think of yourself as a personal writing coach; your self-assessment couldn't have been more point-on!

Emily Hill

I am in awe of the depth and vision of your report on my manuscript! Thank you so much.

— SJ McCormack

Thank you so much! I'm still digesting your comments, but so far find them both challenging and encouraging. I look forward to working with you again.

Ben Newland

Thanks for a very thorough job. I just sent out an email to the 15 people I know in several critique groups, recommending your services. You gave me a great value for my investment.

Bob Seidensticker

I met Jason at the PNWA conference in 2009, and he has guided me through the process of editing CATRIONA'S KNIGHTHOOD, my third novel. Jason comes with my highest recommendation. Seriously, this guy is rocket science.

Barry Friemel

Any new writer's efforts can only be improved by collaborating with a good editor. This is certainly the case with Jason Black, whose skill and even hand has made my debut novel a joy for my friends and family to read.

Emily Hill

I just read your Readthrough Report and want to thank you so much for all the great feedback! It is extremely helpful. I think I learned more from reading your report than I have from all the writing classes I've taken this past year, combined.

— Tara Sheets

Jason delivered much more than he promised. He took an out-of-control story, found its heart and provided me with comments and examples that were substantive and specific enough to lead me to see what I needed to do to fix it. The further I read into his report, the more pleased I was at the depth of his insight. By the time I finished reading, I was excited about trying some of his suggestions. Not only did Jason's comments bring me greater clarity about my story, he helped me in two key craft areas. He showed me how I was spoiling my surprises too soon and also that I was using too heavy a hand on the "invisible" aspects of the story. Both these insights are ones that will help me improve not only this book, but everything I write from now on.

Ann Warner

Jason provided me with a very detailed review of the manuscript, with dozens of changes to make. I highly recommend Jason’s services. He taught me so much about how to not only improve that story, but also how to improve my style, and what to look for when doing my own editing.

Joe Beernink

Your analysis of my book really helped. It took me six months to really think it through, but I am finally revising and I like the product.

Shanae Branham

First off, thank you, thank you. Your suggestions are absolutely going to make the book better and help me be a better writer in turn. Even my very frugal husband even said you're worth every penny!

— Jennie Spohr